I see where you’re going with this, and I like the overall vibe. It communicates the intent i’ll for train you as Greek or Roman sculpture. If this was your intent you’re about 70% there. Decide on a different background, and make your pose slightly less rigid. You should communicate exactly what you want having done it in front of a mirror numerous times or having simple shots taken of you to get your pose refined. You should communicate to your photographer that he’s going to have a very small window to capture your pose, and the fact that you don’t have to hold the pose for very long will make it less rigid by proxy. When I was in my 20s I models for Life drawing classes so just trust me on this. Like I said your concept is solid and you could make this much better. Tons of potential and you’re moving in the right direction.
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I see where you’re going with this, and I like the overall vibe. It communicates the intent i’ll for train you as Greek or Roman sculpture. If this was your intent you’re about 70% there. Decide on a different background, and make your pose slightly less rigid. You should communicate exactly what you want having done it in front of a mirror numerous times or having simple shots taken of you to get your pose refined. You should communicate to your photographer that he’s going to have a very small window to capture your pose, and the fact that you don’t have to hold the pose for very long will make it less rigid by proxy. When I was in my 20s I models for Life drawing classes so just trust me on this. Like I said your concept is solid and you could make this much better. Tons of potential and you’re moving in the right direction.