It’s an ok pose but with everything cutoff it veers into limbless torso territory. I think there should be some dynamics with the hands like grabbing the sheets or tracing the curve of her body. There should be a sense of movement or motion which helps to create an emotion within the frame.
I kinda like it. But I wonder what it would look like if you moved down and to the right a bit to use her hip more as a foreground element.
It’s an ok pose but with everything cutoff it veers into limbless torso territory. I think there should be some dynamics with the hands like grabbing the sheets or tracing the curve of her body. There should be a sense of movement or motion which helps to create an emotion within the frame.